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Don't be nice to me.
Don't tell me I'm
pretty
or
intelligent
or
sweet
or
kind.
Don't compliment me.
Don't tell me I
dress well
or
I'm beautiful
or
I'm talented.
Don't tell me you love my
hair
or
my smile
or
my eyes.

Don't for one second think you
are safe with me.  I will
latch on
hold on
tag along
and cut off your air supply.
I will
tease you
compliment you
beg for your attention
and not let go.

I will
kill you with my honesty
and choke you with my affections.
I dream too much
I need too much
I want too much
I require so much more than you can give me.
So if you don't want the burden
(and who does?)
then run.

Run
fast
hard
far
long
until you can't
hear my voice
or
see my tears
or
feel my touch.

Trust me.
You don't want me in any
shape
form
fashion.
I'm only looking out for you.
So run...
and don't look back.
I wrote this in about 20 seconds. Don't know if its good, don't care if its good. But hope someone can relate.
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samsam594 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
its very good! :)
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Dead-m3m0ries Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010
This is amazing.. and i can definitely relate.. but on the opposite side. I should have ran haha
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KiddosPoet Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
LOL...never had that problem, love...thanks for the comment ;)
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CatastrophicSmile Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010
Yes, pretty much. I hate being the suffocat-or. Why can't be the suffocat-ee like normal people?
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KiddosPoet Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
LOL...what fun would it to be normal???
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Belisana76 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2010
Love it!
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KiddosPoet Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! And thanks for the fave ;)
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Threeleafshamrock Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2010
One of your best Kiddo; less words, no waste; sharp, hard and brilliant....I LOVE this one. Not forced in any way...this really is class! <3
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KiddosPoet Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! Definitely not forced...it was one of those I could not resist...had to write down the words in my head..and seeing as how I have very little self control, I had to post it, lol.
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deadlymuse11 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I can most definitely relate; you should have no worries there, believe me. This ia wonderful poem that really gets down to the point. Great job on this!
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